Welcome to Write Club.
The first rule of Write Club is: You do not give away the ending.
The second rule of Write Club is: You DO NOT give away the ending.
Third rule of Write Club: If a constant reader says "it stinks!", gets bored, or opts out, rewrite the story.
Fourth rule of Write Club: Work on only one story at a time.
Fifth rule: All stories get edited, no matter how good you think you are.
Sixth rule: Stories go on as long as they have to.
And the final rule is: If this is your first time at Write Club, you HAVE to write.